Sunday, 14 November 2010

Operation Time Zone: Sophie wants your feedback!

Here's Sophie's draft Time Zone project. Please leave her a comment about what you think works well and any questions or suggestions you have to help her and her pen pals make it even better!
Well done, Sophie, for being the first to post and getting our project off to a great start!






6 comments:

  1. Dear Sophie,
    I think you should take off the border for slide 2 because it makes it a bit hard to see the writing.I liked how you changed the text colour so it makes it clear to see which country's time is which.
    Takao

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  2. Dear Sophie,
    I loved how you work so hard with your penpals. You exactly explained what is your times and Americas. Bravo Sophie

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  3. Dear Sophie,
    I think that you should put an other background or none for slide 2. But all the other slides are great I especially liked that you added pictures of yourself and your pen pals.

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  4. Dear Sophie,
    I really liked how you made this powerpoint. I think that the boarder makes it harder to see the writing.

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  5. Dear Sophie,
    I think your power point is great. I like how you add you picture and your pen pal.It's really amazing.

    Your Friends,
    Aurel

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  6. Dear Class,
    Thank you so much for your advice and compliments!
    Sophie

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